Adult story

This award is for the adult story you liked best. Alright, I know you'll probably just nominate the story with your favorite character. But let's try to be serious here (he he) and see to the story's stylistic merits! So which one did you like most and why?
The story must be completed, unfinished stories will be rewarded next year!

And the nominees are:

Author and story	Nominator and motivation
Starbright Love Hurts at Ponnyexpressen's sublibrary Sweetwater Epics	Charla Excellent little story that really illustrates the heat between Kid and Lou, even though they are split up. Really shows all the frustration, anger and yes, lust. I loved it.
Cheryl McCreary In the Kitchen on the Fanficlist	*Bright I'm a sucker for NC-17, for Kid and Lou and for mixed feelings and angst - so this story was perfect. It's hot, it's sincere and shows the bumps and fears regarding human relations, those you always encounter - however much love there is. And most of all I love it because it shows that female sexuality is strong and craving - nothing less than that of males.
Diana Ryan Still, the rain... at Bedtime Stories	Sameena why- I really hate this part, how can I just pick one thing. I like the story, the imagery, the emotions, everything.
Mary Ayers A New Day at Bedtime Stories	Karen This is a great story dealing with Buck and Ike. It shows a wonderful tenderness and loving relationship.