And the nominees are:
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Karen
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Wendy
M Excerpt: Louise woke up when she felt the irritating signal of another Immortal. She reached for her sword, which she had put between the mattresses of the bed. Before she got her hands on it, the other Immortal spoke. ?You won?t need that. You?re on Holy Ground.? Holy Ground? What are you talking about?? The Immortal looked like he could be a slave, but acted and talked with authority. This house was built on the sacred burial grounds of the Tunica Indians. They have curse this house. For us it?s still provides sanctuary, if you can out with the ghosts that are here.? What do you want?? To tell that you must leave. The Indians Spirits have sent one their War Chiefs that was buried here to get rid of the occupants of this house? How do you know?? Kid, who was awake by this time, asked skeptically. I?ve was a slave here when Gen. David Bradford built this house in 1796. I have seen many things. They have tried before, but this house has always been bought or the owners too stubborn to leave. I know they are trying to get rid of the residents when Chloe checks on Kate, she just did. Or I see the War Chief Bald Eagle.? Until then Kid and Lou hadn't even noticed the angry looking man. |
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| *bright I wondered, from the first sentence to the last what Jimmy had become.and after finishing, I saw a lot of potential to follow up stories ;) |
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